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Post by Judge Sam on May 22, 2007 16:57:47 GMT -5
This is NOT the final copy, don't freak out! I can remove any section you think is revealing too much. Go over the image with a fine-toothed comb (you know the Citizens will) to see if there's anything revealing in there. I did include lots of things. I included very short bits from two confessionals. I have never in my entire career as a host shown a confessional or even part of a confessional to anyone else so if you feel violated that I showed even those one or two sentences to your fellow spies I apologize profusely and will remove them immediately. Suggest things to add, things to take out. I'm not gonna move that Teaser thread, instead I'll just screencap sentences from it. So if you want to post simple taunts like "Citizens suck!" or even fake taunts that "reveal" information like "I cannot actually believe these stupid idiots believed that crazy role I made up!" then do that ASAP. Here it is:
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Post by Jessica on May 22, 2007 17:05:42 GMT -5
No way in hell is "let the walls come tumbling down - juvenile" thing going in. Sorry
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Post by Judge Sam on May 22, 2007 17:06:36 GMT -5
I've been looking at it and I would suggest taking out:
"We need to get the targets off our backs. So the news of the word has to get out."
That seems a little overdoing it, especially "we" could mean there are 2 in there. Plus the juvenile screencap seems sufficient for that. What do you think?
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Post by Judge Sam on May 22, 2007 17:08:43 GMT -5
Is it the way that it is presented (with it being done three times, or the caps) or just the fact that you do not want people to know that the bunker may possibly be destroyed?
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Post by Jessica on May 22, 2007 17:17:43 GMT -5
Its the fact that someone tried to destroy the bunker.
The way we are currently, the group is supposedly clean. I want to keep it that way. Sorry, I know that would have been a great part for the teaser.
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Post by Jessica on May 22, 2007 17:58:22 GMT -5
I've been looking at it and I would suggest taking out: "We need to get the targets off our backs. So the news of the word has to get out." That seems a little overdoing it, especially "we" could mean there are 2 in there. Plus the juvenile screencap seems sufficient for that. What do you think? Didn't even notice that part. I would rather have neither of them in.
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Post by Tenchi on May 22, 2007 18:08:51 GMT -5
Agreed.
I am quite busy but I will give input later on.
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Post by Claire on May 22, 2007 18:16:11 GMT -5
Sam can you take out the part about a shovel in the lower right? I've used that saying with citz too?
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Post by Claire on May 22, 2007 18:18:25 GMT -5
We should say something about how we exiled *insert name here* and put someone who everyone knows is a citizen, but don't but anneliese. If you want to know why go read the burg
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Post by Claire on May 22, 2007 18:26:17 GMT -5
can't use trina though
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Post by Claire on May 22, 2007 18:30:32 GMT -5
oh i think we should put this in: It's a good thing we imprisoned ______ because now all the stupid citizens think she's a citizen! I told you guys that someone would be saved and it's okay to imprison our own. *insert evil laugh here*
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Post by Tenchi on May 22, 2007 18:33:38 GMT -5
THAT IS SO EVIL!!! And funny!
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Post by Claire on May 22, 2007 18:43:35 GMT -5
yea, if anneliese doesn't go this exile hopefully it'll set her up for the next!
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Post by Tenchi on May 22, 2007 19:07:42 GMT -5
Sam always placed somebody who can save so why not lure them out? Great job guys!
^ | | Add this as a "reply"
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Post by Claire on May 22, 2007 19:28:00 GMT -5
I LOVE IT TENCHI!
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Post by Raphael on May 22, 2007 21:16:04 GMT -5
I like it and I agree about taking out the shovels part and the Juvenile part. Other than that i think it's good
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Post by Judge Sam on May 22, 2007 23:52:20 GMT -5
Okay I'm taking out juvenile, shovels, and cutting down "We need to get the targets off our backs. So the news of the word has to get out." to "news of the word has to get out."
Also I'll add "Sam always placed somebody who can save so why not lure them out? Great job guys!" but I really do not understand this at all lol. o_0 Is it referring to the last Imprisonment where someone was saved? In this quote you are asking a question and then next you congratulate everybody for doing it. I guess I could be reading it wrong but also I think the style of English it uses could be identifiable.
Also if you're going to post more I need it ultra-ASAP, also since we took stuff out I will be adding more stuff, likely from posts made here and also spy convos where you say menacing things (again show some to me plz <3)
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Post by Tenchi on May 22, 2007 23:57:32 GMT -5
Yeah... I stick out like a sore thumb with my writing style... I gave it away a couple of times in the Party ><
Any suggestions?
I will try to dig up some Confessionals
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Post by Tenchi on May 23, 2007 0:08:46 GMT -5
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Post by Judge Sam on May 23, 2007 0:27:13 GMT -5
thank you for those and I'll look them but so far I have made a conscious effort to avoid anything that took place in episode 1 or 2. which kinda sucks but if I did it would confirm to people that there was at least one spy in the game then, I guess that's kinda obvious but.... hmm maybe not... I guess it could work, I dunno I'll think more =)
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Post by Tenchi on May 23, 2007 3:44:34 GMT -5
Er... don't place them ><
This is tough.
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Post by Judge Sam on May 23, 2007 4:42:21 GMT -5
version 2. tell me what to take out. if there's any punctuation or phrases you think identifies you. for example I didn't include any of bebe's speech because it's identifiable. tenchi also sometimes misses contractions I noticed (Im, dont, etc) so I cut those out. I put tons in. My original idea was just to taunt, not to reveal any info so if something is too revealing tell me and I'll yank it out.
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Post by Jessica on May 23, 2007 5:06:02 GMT -5
I still dont like "news of the word has to get it."
From the position we are in now, there are no spies in the group. As long as they don't think there are, we (Tenchi and I) should be safe. But if they do know, one or both of us are screwed, probably Tenchi.
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Post by Tenchi on May 23, 2007 6:12:39 GMT -5
Yes please... Nothing about the words. I cannot have them back on me, since it narrows down to six people again and 2/6 people that was involved in that is a Spy.
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Post by Judge Sam on May 23, 2007 17:18:21 GMT -5
okay that's gone. I'd 8,000 times rather censor too much than censor too little and have someone read a statement and say "that reminds me of ____!" Of course they could say that reminds me of Matthew, or Trina, or someone else too. This is going up around 7-8 PM CST tonight, so if you wanted to include that graffiti leaderboard or that movie Claire was talking about. This is the near-final version so make final changes or send off on it =)
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Post by Tenchi on May 23, 2007 17:31:43 GMT -5
Do not place the leaderboard. I have been busy these past few days that I cannot make the changes making that time. SOme other time though... or maybe they would just see it in the HQ. Thanks for everything Sam!
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Post by Claire on May 23, 2007 18:00:33 GMT -5
i can't have the video done in 1 hour! there's no way! but I can have it done soon! maybe tomorrow night
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Post by Judge Sam on May 23, 2007 18:23:49 GMT -5
it's up in Burg. you guys can work on leaderboard / movie and i'll post it when it's done but make it soon. =)
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Post by Bebe on May 24, 2007 14:45:28 GMT -5
lol at the parts that came from my confessional. sam you bad, you so bad.
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Post by Judge Sam on May 24, 2007 15:44:30 GMT -5
I couldn't use any posts or conversations you have b/c your bebe-talk is so identifiable -_-
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